A client-focussed copy style guide

Let’s be fair, few customers are professional writers and few hire one when making a web site. That is why I now include professional copywriting into every estimate as a non-removable item. When customers are adding their own copy to a site, I give them ten simple tips to follow.

Avoid using abbreviated ‘and’ (‘&’) (an ampersand as it is properly known), as if you do your pages will not validate. Although breaking validation will not make the world fall apart, being valid is a mark of a professional web site. So you should strive for it as hard as possible. Ampersands are more acceptable in headings. If you really, really must use an ampersand, you must write it as &.

Do not type words in all uppercase letters. Just don’t. All uppercase words are bad for accessibility (a screen-reader reads each letter separately, not as a word) and are harder to read. They look, well, just plain unprofessional too.

Do not use exclamation marks (!) except, if absolutely necessary, in headings or for branding purposes. Exclamation points cheapen your content rather than enhance it and you should make your point effective by what you write. You should not need to use an exclamation point.

Choose your capitalization case carefully and stick to it. This is particularly important in headings. So choose to use sentence-case or title-case and then stick to your decision. I find that sentence-case is easier to read and easier on the eye. It is also less formal and friendlier in tone.

Avoid using numerals in your sentences as they make text harder and slower to read on screen. Instead of writing Our course lasts for 3 days… use the word ‘three’ instead. Reserve numerals for dates and prices and other numeric data.

Avoid referring to yourself in the third-person. So don’t say things like [Stuff and Nonsense] are leaders in…. Instead refer to yourself and your company as ‘we’. We provide…, we love… etc. This makes you sound more personal and approachable.

Avoid referring to your customers as our customers, instead refer to you. For example instead of writing [Stuff and Nonsense] provide their customers with the best experience…, say instead We provide you with the best experience… or possibly At [Stuff and Nonsense] we provide you with the best experience….

While SEO is important to get visitors to your site through search-engines, it is also important to give them the best reading experience when they arrive. Keep your copy short and focussed. Keep repetition to a minimum, particularly of your company name. Above all, keep your copy short, content-rich and free from hard-sell or marketing speak.

Avoid confusing the issue. Try not to put too much or too varied information on a single page. If you do have a large amount of copy, break up that content into easily scannable sections through the use of headings and lists.

Keep your use of links focussed on the important calls to action. For example, if your page contains ten links and only one goes to the booking page, the visual importance of that booking link will be reduced. Try to avoid diluting your calls to action.

I would love to expand and clarify these tips and publish it as a simple, one-page tip sheet someday soon so that web designers and developers can point customers to as a reference.

There have been 11 replies

  1. #1

    Antoine E Butler Sr

    Perfect! I’m always on the look out for better ways to help clients “maintain” a quality web presense in the long term. This is going in to effect first thing in the AM.

    Thanks

    31st Dec 2008
  2. #2

    Martijn van der Ven

    Great write up, this is not only a guide for clients. I would advise every website maker to read it through at least once.

    31st Dec 2008
  3. #3

    Shaun Hard

    Good advice Andy. Can we re-use your advice with attribution of course?

    31st Dec 2008
  4. #4

    Andy Clarke

    Shaun Hard: Sure, and please link back to this entry if you would.

    I’ve been thinking (in light of how well my 24ways Contract Killer article was received) of setting up a collaborative resource for designers where we can share this stuff. I think that if times are going to get tougher, making our lives easier and our work faster would be a good thing. What do you think?

    31st Dec 2008
  5. #5

    Scott Nelle

    Great guidelines, Andy. As Martijn mentioned above, everyone that creates content for the web should review these suggestions and really take them to heart. As to your comment above, I’d love to see a collaborative space to post this type of information. Client contact is a mystery to many web workers, so things like this and your contract template are really valuable.

    31st Dec 2008
  6. #6

    Marc

    I like the idea of briefing the client in this way, something I have never done in this detail but something I will look into.

    I also love your idea of a collaborative resource for designers. It is always great to see examples of how others do business.

    31st Dec 2008
  7. #7

    Antoine E Butler Sr

    You have my vote for the collaborative resource idea. Another concept I think the enire industry could benefit from. Dare I say it, but it may lead to an open set of standards or best practices in regards to how we do business.

    31st Dec 2008
  8. #8

    Bridget Stewart

    Re: Collaborative Resource

    /signed

    31st Dec 2008
  9. #9

    prisca

    great points, Andy - I think we all try to brief our clients to some degree on how to write good copy but a list of points is much more helpful.
    And yes, a collaborative resource would be fantastically useful ;)

    31st Dec 2008
  10. #10

    Carolyn Wood

    This sort of thing is great. You’ll help eliminate a good bit of junk from the web, just by inspiring people to start thinking more carefully about their content.

    Because my specialty is writing for the web, I love you for including professional copywriting in your bids. Thank you!

    31st Dec 2008
  11. #11

    Neil Bradley

    Excellent article. The Plain English Campaign also has some guides on how to write understandable copy - there is also a brief guide on Websites and Design & Layout:
    http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/guides.htm

    2nd Jan 2009
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